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EXCELLENT animation. This is great and you know it. Its just such a shame about the audio. The music is fine, but if only the voices were recorded and mastered professionally.
Its hard for a viewer or listener to get really involved in art such as music and animation. For someone to be carried away by what you have created, it needs to be perfect.
I know that you know the voice recordings aren't done very well, but you need to know that people only realise how hard you worked on somthing when they find a flaw.
That might sound confusing, but for people to enjoy somthing, they cant be able to analyse it. They get lost in it and don't realise that it was made by an everyday human. Unfortunately, (and its such a shame because you have put so much work into this) I couldn't focus on what this was all about, because my attention was diverted by the poor voice recordings.
..or just forget everything I said... I confused myself as I was typing this.